Convoluted mess

I have no clue what the story was about in the end. All characters felt blend and interchangeable, at the beginning we are introduced to a "point-of-view" character that then vanishes from the story. It was really hard to tell who is talking to whom or what are the exact relations between the characters. On top there are several time jumps between story lines, at least I think there were time jumps?! It seems that the writers at BL have a real problem to write Sisters of Battle stories, just come up with a interesting main character in a simple story and then start to expand that characters universe, it works fine for Space Marines and Guard Commisars.

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Confusing

Let me start off with the good: the writing itself was solid and the VA was good.

Sadly that's about it.

The issues: There's no "red" thread, things just happen because they do, with no much rhyme or reason. It feels more like you're at a theme park and looking at the attractions than actually reading a book. The guard section of the book took up way too much space, it's honestly more like 50% sisters and 50% guard. This books feels more like a first draft than an actual release.

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