Problems with time-descriptions

The excessive use of „instantly“, „in an instant“, and other words of instantaneous time-descriptions gets worse and worse even into the 3rd book. This way of creating an urgency in situations is perfectly fine in fight-scenes but since it’s used ALL THE TIME, it feels like full blown anxiety throughout the whole book. Very stressful.
Example in B3: the Silverback vanished, when he gave orders to his minions, turned around and walked into the building.
Why use the word “vanish”, when the guy just strolls around and out of sight?
Anyway, the first book was great; captivating & entertaining in its action, world-design and creative use of skills. This 2nd one still carries some of it over and introduces the enemy & difficulty of fighting something invisible, as well as deepening the other characters.

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Viele Stunden Wiederholung von Teil 1

Der erste Teil der Reihe hat mir gut gefallen.
Darum war ich umso mehr entäuscht als die Story AUßERHALB DES MAIN-CLUSTERS angefangen hat.
Ich hätte gerne einen deutlichen Hinweis dazu gesehen und gewusst an welcher Stelle ich einsteigen kann um nicht alles zu wiederholen

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Good idea, terrible writing!

Author repeats the same words over and over again in a way that made we want to scream. Also every half decent idea of main character is explained in such detail that you just want to fast foreward the audiobook. Its a shame really because of the nice idea behind the story.

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to many bad decisions

It's really annoying how bad the plans were, how very ilogical and dependent on luck.
I have the biggest problem with them splitting up, especially without a method to communicate, that's so unintelligent that it hurts.
Then we have the fact that he knows about crimes happening and he's actively trying to stop them, but doesn't inform the organisations that stopped these crimes in his last life.
Also this plan of playing the villain to stop the fighting of 2 other groups is much worse than the plan to just go in with the autority of someone strong and stop the fight through talking.

It's also extremly annoying how ppl react in very abnormal and unintelligent ways.
For example that this important guy of the angels just dismisses the betrayel of one of their strongest emisaries just because of another problem.
Or how Shin can freeze up in a life or death situation even though he saw with his own eyes they hadn't shown any care for human life until now.

And then there is this talking about the same things all the time, this audio book would be 10 hours long instead of 24 hours if it wouldn't explain how certain things work every hour again and again.

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