Sadly, this is just bad writing

There were quite s few unlikely occurances and small cracks in the suspension of disbelieve when listening to the 1st and 2nd book.
But this story was clearly written the wrong way around, it's apparant that the author wanted this annoying love drama but couldn't find a believeable way to let it happen...so the whole thing was forced into a mold that didn't fit.

What makes this so annoying is the fact that the story easily could've worked well and still would've been a big drama with just one major change: Jake should've been the one to start flirting, first for fun with a good looking woman and then later on the planet he realises that he actually starts to have feelings for her, while Twenty is fighting off the advances inspite of her feelings for Jake for the greater good but her defenses start to crumble when she's defending him on the planet.

The way it is portrayed in the story it can't ever happen since Twenty wouldn't ever have considered flirting with Jake because of the greater good, the size of the crush wouldn't have mattered and feelings of love wouldn't have developed without the flirting.

Also how Twenty is written like a tragic heroine is ridiculouse, she knows exactly what she's doing the whole time but she gets the pitty treatment while his wife gets the jealous mean girlfriend treatment even though she has a good reason to feel wronged.
I lost any respect for Twenty pretty much at the start of the story and then I lost the respect and any compassion for Jake half way through it.

Then we have the future sight warning thingy wich some of the Suvis allegedly possess either not working or working but always to late to change anything. Something massively dangerous like the storms should've been on the Suvis survival radar.

And a list of other smaller problems with the story that I was able to overlook in the 1st and 2nd book because I liked the characters and there were no big flaws that broke my suspension of disbelieve.

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