Awsome part 2

I love the likeable characters and the detailed planned out dungeon. I can fully imagine the dungeon and it's layout a trait that some other dungeoncore books are lacking. I can't wait to hear more from this series!

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Major lack of logic at the end

I loved the first part of this series and I really liked the second part until the last 3h exclusively because of a blatant lack of logic on the protagonists part. What do I mean by that: *slight spoiler* The protagonist - instead of supporting the dungeon and the town in a live or death battle - runs off with his party into a live or death situation based on a 3 min conversation with random enemy leader, he has never encountered before, just because this enemy knows fragments of his past. It's basically as if John Snow encounters the Ice king during the battle of the wall - however, instead of fighting the witch kings tells John Snow: "Well listen John, I've known your father for quite some time now and I know that you're still looking for your siblings - why don't you just leave this battlefield and go through this portal which will lead you to a center of my power, where you will probably die in order to find your missing siblings. In this case, our protagonist would gather his friends, goes through the portal to an unknown but definitely highly lethal location based on the word of his death sworn enemy.. aaand surprise, it was an ambush. The end. Of course since this is one of THOSE stories everything is well in the end through the magic of fate and the feather of the author. Still decent listen if you get yourself some disinfectant to drink during the last chapters.

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full drama, but no logic

The story is written to extract 100% drama, but loses it's logical integrity.
For example the whole situation around the creation of the vampire makes no sense, the fairy was always for getting stronger and she is from the god of justice so her temper tantrum makes doubly no sense when the ahole who sacrificed someone else for his life kills himself because he is dumb, that was exactly the kind of ppl she should want to die in the dungeon. Then we have situation that the dungeon conveniently can't control the monster it created and also conveniently can't contain it even though it makes no sense that a vampire can go through walls.
This was the main event that spoiled the story for me, but there are many more small things that already added up before, like Jack just not telling his team his problems even though it concerns them too and the team letting him get away with being so secretive even though they know that they will have to deal with his problems probably sooner than later.

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