Enjyoable OPness

Gotta love it when a Story makes ya Smile.

Enjoyment of the finest.

Love all the sub characters and the main character is a hoot. xD
Sure Amelia onehits everyproblem that can be dealt with force. But that's not her problem!
She just wants some peace, quite and possible cook for people!
Why is everyone bothering her!
Geez!

Not her fault if she unleashes her anger, right?

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Deep Story

Even tho the Story starts like many others it feels rather deep and told slow and good paced. Slowly i get a deeper view of the hidden mechanics of the world and i like that its not as black and white as it seems but more complex and interesting.
I also love op characters but its told really well here with the side characters also told enjoyable.

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I love Bucky

Bucky is best chicken ever.
I did not know, that I could relate to a non speaking chicken so much.
Oh, and the other characters also have some character growth

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Looking forward, hoping it gets better…

I thoroughly enjoyed the first two books in this series, as they were gripping, imaginative, and featured a compelling main character. However, by the third book, the story began to lose its appeal for me. One of the most glaring issues is the sense that the author had not fully planned out the plot from the beginning. For example, the main character (MC) is initially said to be stuck in the void for ten years, only for it to be later revealed that she was actually there for hundreds of years. This shift feels abrupt, as if the rules of the story are being invented on the fly, disrupting the consistency of the world. Similarly, the MC’s initial motivation to return to her family is emphasized early on, only for it to be later mentioned offhand that she knows they are dead. These inconsistencies make it hard to stay immersed in the story.

Another issue that stood out was how little the MC’s long period of isolation is explored. Being stuck alone in the void for hundreds of years should have had a profound effect on her psyche, yet there’s very little reflection on how this experience affected her as a human being. The mental and emotional toll of such prolonged isolation is glossed over, which could have added an interesting layer of depth to the character. Instead, she comes out of this seemingly unchanged, which feels like a missed opportunity to explore the complexity of her situation.

The handling of multiple points of view (POVs) also became problematic. While I understand that switching between characters can naturally lead to some repetition, it becomes tedious when entire sections are repeated word-for-word from different perspectives. It’s especially frustrating when the same character reiterates their thoughts using almost the exact same phrasing, over and over again. This redundancy bogs down the pacing of the story, making certain parts feel drawn out and monotonous instead of contributing to the narrative.

By the third book, these issues collectively led to a loss of enjoyment. What began as an exciting, well-paced adventure with rich character development slowly devolved into something less cohesive and engaging. The inconsistencies in the plot, lack of psychological depth in the MC, and repetitive writing ultimately dulled the excitement and tension that drew me into the series initially.

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